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Haiku / Senryu

Haiku is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5, 7, 5) or 17 syllables in all. Haiku is usually written in the present tense, focuses on nature (seasons), and includes a kireji (cutting word) and a kigo (season word). Japanese Haiku differ from those in English in that Japanese “syllables” are counted much differently. Some writers of English Haiku disregard the syllable count and try to stay true to the spirit of the original Japanese form. Some, like myself, don’t always stick to the traditional subject matter.

Senryu is a related form that is identical in structure to Haiku (5/7/5), but differs in subject and tone. Senryū tend to be about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature, and senryū are often cynical or darkly humorous while haiku are more serious. Unlike haiku, senryū do not include a kireji and do not generally include a kigo.

My understanding is that Haiku can be about human nature and Senryu can be about nature. The major difference is the tone of the poem.

I’ve grouped these two forms together because, often, it is hard to classify a poem as one or the other. Also, I often experiment with these forms and have produced some that I don’t think really fall into either category.

More info at Shadow Poetry

Haiku Written While Fishing

Wind on the water Ripples across the pond Grey clouds in the sky 4/1/17 Poem #2 for National […]

April 2, 2017 Formal Poetry, Haiku / Senryu, Poetry

Sunlight (Haiku)

Sunlight creates life Life starts and ends in darkness Everything born dies 3/27/17 This Haiku is in response to Colleen’s […]

March 28, 2017 Formal Poetry, Haiku / Senryu, Poetry

Inhabitants of Níu Heimar: Alternate Versions (Haiku)

You might consider these “outtakes” or alternate versions of yesterday’s haiku, Inhabitants of Níu Heimar. I’m honestly not sure […]

March 27, 2017 Formal Poetry, Haiku / Senryu, Poetry

Inhabitants of Níu Heimar (Haiku)

Æsir, Vanir; Men Ælfar, Svartælfar; Jötnar Fog, Fire, and Hel 2-22-17 Note: There are two alternate versions of this […]

March 26, 2017 Formal Poetry, Poetry

Oðinn (haiku)

One-eyed Alföðr A raven on each shoulder Great Gungnir in hand 3/21/17 Pronunciation Guide: ð = th as […]

March 22, 2017 Formal Poetry, Haiku / Senryu, Poetry

Planting Seeds (Haiku)

Seeds planted in dirt Thrust into Jorð’s fertile womb Water brings new life 3/20/17 This haiku is my […]

March 21, 2017 Formal Poetry, Haiku / Senryu, Poetry

Its Been a Long Cold Lonely Winter (a haiku)

White patches of snow An icy chill in the air Spring is on the way 2/22/17

February 23, 2017 Formal Poetry, Haiku / Senryu, Poetry

Warming Up (Haiku)

The sun is shining Snow and ice melting Flash floods on the way 1/20/17

January 20, 2017 Formal Poetry, Haiku / Senryu, Poetry

Hurtful

The most hurtful phrase In any language I know: “We can still be friends.” 11-7-16

November 20, 2016 Formal Poetry, Haiku / Senryu, Poetry

Haiku Written While Reading Book V of Plato’s Republic

The man holds knowledge. He knows something, not nothing. Nothing can’t be known. 11/16/16 Notes: Image is a […]

November 17, 2016 Formal Poetry, Haiku / Senryu, Poetry

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